Hello and congrats on completing lesson one. My name is Rob and I'm a teaching assistant for Drawabox who will be handling your lesson one critique. Starting with your superimposed lines these are off to a fine start. You are keeping a clearly defined starting point with all of your wavering at the opposite end. Your ghosted lines and planes turned out well. You are using the ghosting method to good effect to get confident linework with a pretty decent deal of accuracy that will get better and better with practice.

Your tables of ellipses are coming along pretty good. You are doing a good job drawing through your ellipses and focusing on consistent smooth ellipse shapes. This is carried over nicely into your ellipses in planes. It's great that you aren't overly concerned with accuracy and are instead focused on getting smooth ellipse shapes. Although accuracy is our end goal it can't really be forced and tends to come with mileage and consistent practice more than anything else. Your ellipses in funnels are having some issues with tilting off the minor axis. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/18/notaligned This is something you should always start considering when drawing your ellipses. One thing you could have done with these is start with a narrower degree ellipse in the center and then widen the degrees of the ellipses as they move outwards in the funnel. Please check the example here. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/18/step3 This helps with practicing different degrees of ellipses. Your ellipses are off to a great start but there's still room for improvement so keep practicing them during your warmups.

The plotted perspective looks great, nothing to mention here. Your rough perspective exercises have a few fundamental misunderstandings that I want to go over. You are getting a mix of confident linework here along with some wobble creeping back into some of your lines. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/14/wobblinglines This is probably happening because you are more concerned with accuracy now that you are constructing boxes and you are slowing down your stroke to compensate. That hesitation because of your concern for accuracy while making your mark is what is reintroducing the wobble into your lines. Try and rely a bit more on the muscle memory you build up while ghosting your mark and almost make your mark without thinking. This will be less accurate at first but will give you consistently smooth and confident linework which is our first priority. Accuracy will come with mileage and can't really be forced. The other possibility is that you have reverted back to drawing from your wrist for some of these lines. Just something to keep an eye on. You should be drawing from your shoulder for basically every line you draw, even shorter ones. The wrist should be reserved for detail work only. So the major issue I'm noticing here is a lack of understanding of how boxes work in one point perspective almost entirely. Especially in consideration to the vanishing point you've placed for all of these exercises. To illustrate this point further I want to point out that you didn't extend the depth lines of your boxes back to the horizon line like the assignment asked but instead you connected your box corners directly to the vanishing point. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/20/step9 While this also gives you an idea of how off your depth lines were it's giving you less information. You would see for instance that a lot of the depth lines on your boxes are not even pointed in the same direction as the vanishing point. I'm going to recommend you reread the materials for this section and rewatch the videos so you can get a better understanding of how a box should be drawn in one point perspective. Remember that depth lines on your boxes all need to be converging to the vanishing point. You also drew all of your boxes as if they were under the horizon line while some of the boxes were clearly above it which means the depth lines would be converging downwards towards the vanishing point.

Since you have still have a fairly fundamental misunderstanding of how to draw a box in perspective the rotated box exercise and organic perspective have significant issues that can't really be rectified until you understand the lesson materials from two earlier box perspective assignments. One thing that would help with the rotated box exercise would be to keep the gaps between your boxes narrow and consistent. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/21/guessing Keeping the gaps narrow and consistent really helps with inferring information about neighboring boxes rotation and proportion.

The organic perspective exercise is showing signs of improvement when it comes to confident linework but you since you are still struggling with the idea of constructing a box all of your boxes are incredible wonky. As a revision I'd like you to redo both pages of the rough perspective boxes and then submit them for revision. After those are finished and I take a look and see that you have a better idea of how to construct a box in one point perspective I'm going to have you redo the rotated box exercise as well as the organic perspective box pages.