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1:55 AM, Monday July 10th 2023
Hi, I'll be reviewing your hw.
Superimposed Lines: Second part of this is better. There are quiet a lot of wobbly lines. More warming up would help I think.
Ghosted Lines: Better but still a number of wobbly lines.
Ghosted Planes: Ah, here we get our really good straight lines. This shows improvment.
Table of Elipses: Good job on these.
Elipses In Planes: I can see a real attempt to keep everyting inside the boundries. Good.
Funnels: Pretty good, one thing that could have helped was keeping these a little spread apart.
Ploted perspective: Beautiful on these.
Rough Perspective: Not all the lines make it but they do go to the horizone line. Excellent.
Rotated Boxes: A little messy but I think you understand the concept.
Organic Perspective: Here it seems your pen is running out of ink but well done.
Next Steps:
Two things before moving on to think about. Make sure you pen doesn't run out of ink, or press a little harder down. Second always warmup so your wobbly lines become more straight. But I will mark this as finished so move onto 250 box challenge.
Pentel Pocket Brush Pen
This is a remarkable little pen. Technically speaking, any brush pen of reasonable quality will do, but I'm especially fond of this one. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.